1. Hey, I know that this may be weird for me to ask you but I have been struggling so hard to try and pull my weight with bills and everything and I almost have enough I have just been doing so much school work trying to get all settled in. Is there anyway I could borrow $20 and I will give it back to you as soon as I get paid? I will get you some chick fil a when I finally get money back.
2. Hey Mom, I have been working so hard lately trying to work as much as I can, but I also am tryign to get all of my schoolwork done before it is due also. I am trying to pay this one bill and all I need is $20. Will you please let me do some chores or something around your house so I can get $20?
3. Hey Bryant, I know that this may be out of line to ask but this month I have really had a hard time getting all of my money in order for all of my bills. I know you know that I go t oschool full-time so I can not work an ideal amount. I feel like I have not really worked as much especially in this first month of trying to get settled in with school. I was just wondering if you could maybe lend me $20 so I can pay this bill and then you can just take it out of my check total. It would be helping me out so much because if I am late with the bill I have to just pay for for a late fee. if you can help me I would appreciate it so much. Thank you.
4. Hello Mr. Gates, right now I am trying to reach for the stars and chase my dreams as a full-time student at Kennesaw State. I am getting my college education but sometimes it has its costs. I cannot work as much as I need to in order to make enough money for rent because I am at my house studying and doing homework. I am down to nothing in my wallet and have a bill that I need to pay in a couple of days. I was just wondering if you could please lend me $20 to get the bill paid off, maybe afterwards I can focus more on studying again than trying to get money for my bill.
Tuesday, September 11, 2012
Tuesday, September 4, 2012
Argument #2
"Writing with Voice" was a very powerful article in my opinion. It tells you a lot about what voice is exactly and how some people use it. I feel as though if you have voice in your paper, you are automatically making it more original than what everyone else has. When you use voice in your papers you will find it easier to write and most likely you can write your papers faster this way. When they show the paper that said "TRUST THE GUSH" on it with dripping ink it goes to show that the girl is truely writing what she feels is important. When I heard "trust the gush" I was kind of confused, but when they exlpained the meaning it made it feel very powerful and true that if you just focus and write what comes to your mind, that is the first step to writing an exceptional paper.
I believe that if someone is using voice to enahnce there paper they should get extra points. It is showing you that they are taking the words in the paper and really relating and making them their own. You make your paper so much more powerful and readable when you use voice in it. The only thing that could be questioned when thinking about getting points would be that not everyone has the same voice. Someone could be very bold about a statement they believe is true and the teacher could completely disagree, this may make the teacher bias to where she or he will not award points to you.
I believe that if someone is using voice to enahnce there paper they should get extra points. It is showing you that they are taking the words in the paper and really relating and making them their own. You make your paper so much more powerful and readable when you use voice in it. The only thing that could be questioned when thinking about getting points would be that not everyone has the same voice. Someone could be very bold about a statement they believe is true and the teacher could completely disagree, this may make the teacher bias to where she or he will not award points to you.
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